How's the start of the story?

I like it, It actually reminds me of the story i'm writing right now. You have defiantly manged to convey the mood and atmostere of the area and world, and your character sounds really intersting, I think youv'e done well, I hope you want to publish it one day, if you keep up at the rate and quiltiy you have gotten so far it is defiantly in your reach but its still a little early to tell.